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I'm afraid you don't need to hunt much for this one.

Comic #1: Fearful Hunter
Author: Jon Macy
Provenance: Received as an order from Kickstarter

Sometimes, you back a project on Kickstarter, because it's pointed out to you by someone you respect, and you support that kind of thing overall. I like gay-centered comics, I heard about this from Alex Woolfson, it looked interesting, and so I went for it. And... well, it's not like it's bad exactly, but... yeah.

So this is a contemporary story, set near a small town, where our first main character, Oisin, is apprenticed to a local druid, and nearing the completion of his training. That'll involve binding himself to a god of nature, and yet he finds his attention drawn at a party to a werewolf, Byron. And that's dangerous, because werewolves, once they bond, mate for life.

So the story proceeds as you might expect - Oisin is encouraged to complete his training and fulfill the goals of the druids, but Byron seems like a good partner for him. There are some twists in the story, but the overall strokes of it aren't surprising. You know what you're going to get.

The art is often really good, but variable - the more complex, druidic vision stuff is often really interesting, and creepy, and the nature scenes are also well executed. But the character work is spottier, and it wasn't always easy to tell what character it was I was looking at.

The bigger thing is all the sexual content. There's a lot of sex in this - between men, and between men and gods, which can get very overwrought. But the scenes are for the most part not relevant to the plot or to the furthering of the characters, and that doesn't really make me that happy. There's also a decent amount of half-naked guys and such in unrealistic ways, which adds to this air. Nothing wrong with drawing guys in different states of undress, but if it's as part of a story, I want it to connect up better.

So... there are some things to commend the book - the art really can be beautiful and imaginative. But the story is average, and there are enough issues that I'd more recommend this just if you really want a new gay comic to read, and you ran across this one. No need to hunt this down too hard.

Date: 2016-04-20 12:54 pm (UTC)
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I have a huge problem with all the gratuitous sex in general I find in all sorts of things these days, and not because I'm a withered old prune, either. Maybe because sex for it's own sake didn't appeal much to me, but just as I'm happier when such things fit into my own life narrative, I'm happier when they fit into narratives that are more contrived.

Date: 2016-04-20 03:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Yeah... I guess this is my feeling about the difference between erotica and romance here. Whatever you want to do in your erotica is fine - if unrealistically heightened and gratuitous sensuality is what you want find arousing, and you can draw or write it, then sure, go for it! The story doesn't have to be paramount in that (although I still prefer some narrative, yes).

But this is meant to be a romance, and the story is supposed to be part of that. It's worth noting that the Druidic rituals portrayed in the book do have sex as a component, and so the sex around that stuff is plot-relevant and fine, to an extent. But there's just so much more sexual content beyond that... it detracted from the story that I think he was trying to tell, and that's when it's bothersome, I find.


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